em muốn nhờ anh sửa dùm em bài essay. em đang định apply vô truman state university nhưng mà writing của em rất kém (em học các môn tự nhiên khá hơn).
"I was born in a poor highland province of Viet Nam – Gia Lai where studying aboard is just an unrealizable dream. The biggest dream of most parents here was their children were able to go to colleges in one of two biggest cities of Viet Nam -Ho Chi Minh City and Ha Noi capital. I do not remember when I started to dream about one day I could sit in a lecture theater of a US university. In my memories, I just know that this thinking have existed in my head long time ago
One of reasons why people in my hometown rarely think about studying aboard is lacking information. We have some English teachers, some English tutor classes, but we do not have any professional schools or centers to teach English in a systematic way and provide students necessary information for studying in foreign countries. When internet develops, we can find more information but it is still not enough. At Gia Lai, any Ielts or Toeft tests have never been held.
My parents have never had chances to go to colleges. With their great love for their children, they always want we have the best education. Therefore, they decided to move our home. Moving from Gia Lai to Ho Chi Minh City is the hardest decision of my family. It could give my sisters, my brother and me a better education and big chances to change our lives. However, we had to go without my mother. She accepted to stay in Gia Lai alone to keep my family’s income stably. The day when we moved, my mother silently standed in station, waved her hand to good bye us with two tears dropping on her face.
As I have said, moving to Ho Chi Minh is a big chance to change our lives. If we did not move here, I would never know CIE and then would never know Truman state university. Being accepted by your university will help me nearer my dream. I believe that Truman state university will bring to me a good education which is a solid foundation for my future.
I’m looking forward the acceptation from your university. This will a great gift for all of our efforts- for my attempt to study, for my father hard working, and for my mother’s scarification."
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