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    Admission essay

    Ðề: Admission essay Mr Vha08, I really wonder about the list of your safe school. Why do they require so little money? Is it because of the educational quaility or beacuse they receive money from the government? Can you suggest me some more good school? I can't judge school through ranking.
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    Admission essay

    Ðề: Admission essay Skidmore is my favourite college that I really want to enroll in. I know that this college is very costly too. But is there any chance for me to get accepted? UTD is university texas of dalas. I am sorry for its short version
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    Admission essay

    Ðề: Admission essay My family contribution is 8-12k a year. And i prefer living in the city. But I really wonder about my score could be the factor that these college will elimimate me
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    Admission essay

    Ðề: Admission essay Cháu cám ơn bác rất nhiều về bài sửa của bác. Đây là những trường cháu định app ạ: Skidmore College Berea College Randolp college Messiah college Truman State Lycoming College UTd 10K Ohio Wesleyan University Smith College University of Alabama Cháu học ở...
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    Admission essay

    Ðề: Admission essay in addition, I want to add an idea of how i treat my sister, the way I answer her, lead her to a better way of understanding. Is that a good idea
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    Admission essay

    Ðề: Admission essay Thank you so much for your time for my essay. I'm really grateful for that It may sound a little risky but I want to send essay to Berea College. I just want to give a try. So I will lengthen the essay to 2 pages and I think I will have to ask for your help again..
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    Admission essay

    Ðề: Admission essay Thank you so much for your time and comment on my essay. I can't wait to see your correction on my essay but I'm really confused about the new rule of maximum 500-word-essay. I don't know what part to be cut and I really need your help
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    Admission essay

    Ðề: Admission essay Essay No2 My essay ap No2 My childhood is replete with vivid imagination and unbeatable curiosity. Like other eager children, I had the instinct of asking probably silly questions like why is there existence of right and left hands distinction or why milk is in canton...
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    Admission essay

    Dear mrVha08, I am Hoang Anh. I have just finished my app essay and I hope that you would give me some useful advices on how to improve it. Thank you a lot and looking forward to hearing from you. Essay No1 Title please I have read a book named “The flipsides” –stories telling about...