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The benefits of education are endless. Education gives us knowledge about the world. It develops in people a perspective of looking at life, build opinions and have points of view on everything about life. Also it’s evident that without proper education it is hard to succeed in modern world. Education is the standard according to which people are judged, and therefore to meet the high expectations one has to obtain proper knowledge via education. A brilliant education could open doors of opportunities. Being educated is very important aspect of my life. Why people want to have their high education? As for me I have my reasons why I want to get high education.
I’m personally aware that the satisfaction and feeling of accomplishment upon receiving a college degree is one that cannot easily be topped. College education is becoming even more important than it has been in the past. A bachelor's degree is now becoming a minimum requirement for many jobs that previously only required a high school degree. Education is important because without it I feel disconnected form the world, and I can’t really live a successful life. With a decent education I can change the world, or at least make a major difference. One might observe that education get you connected with the world and create a brighter path for life to go through.
I think a good education is imperative because it will influence my life in the future. From my early age, my parents often tells me about how education is very important to find a good job. And this is true because if I want to be a registered nurse, businessman, doctor or a lower, or an engineer I must have an education. It will help me get a well-paying job, or open up a business, which is something I am passionate about. In a business, you are usually dealing with invoices or bills, receipts, make purchases and sales; so a great skill of math is involved as well as organization and management skills. One might observe that a decent education is key to make plans a reality.
I also think an excellent education is crucial because it will affect my family in one way or another. It will benefit the family I have now, and the family I will have in the future. I hope to support my family financially, with the great job education will help me get, and by being a role model and educator to the children I will raise. I want to be able to answer questions my children will have to; to give them knowledge and a decent education for their futures as well. An education would also impact the family I have now because a nice education would give me a chance to go out into the world, get a job, and somewhere to live. Without a job I would not have the money to provide for myself, or get a home, and would be an inconvenience to my family now. One might observe that the education I get or do not get will affect my family, and family is very important to me.
Another reason why I want to get high education is because all members in my family have already received their high education. My father has finished the Science Bachelor, and my mother has finished Account and Finance Bachelor. All my life I was listening from them that it is very important to get high education. When I decided to attend college they were happy and encouraged me to work hard. They bought me a car as a way of motivating me. It also helps me to know that if am educated I can acquire great things for myself. One might observe that family’s support in getting education is very important. At least it was so for me.
College will give me a better knowledge of things. For one I will be able to work better with others because I will have to work with people more often. Via education I will acquire not only factual knowledge but also the way a refined person should behave. Good manners and gentle ways are taught in the process of socializing and cultivating which is inseparable from education. Therefore I will have more experience to communicate with people. Having more knowledge will also give me better problem solving skills because in college you have to work harder and study more. I will be able to take on greater task in life because a good education will grant a better chance at functioning better as a whole. One might observe that through education we learn how to socialize, solve problems and make us unique from uneducated people.
In conclusion, I believe education is essential in every area of my life. I’m not sure many people many people realize it, but education is an extremely critical part of life. By having decent education, my life can enhance the lives of others. A man named Nelson Mandela once said, “Education is the most powerful weapon we can use to change the world.” And I want to change the world. To me, a good education equals greater life. One might observe that education is most important in life like our basic need foods, clothe and shelter.
The benefits of education are endless. Education gives us knowledge about the world. It develops in people a perspective of looking at life, build opinions and have points of view on everything about life. Also it’s evident that without proper education it is hard to succeed in modern world. Education is the standard according to which people are judged, and therefore to meet the high expectations one has to obtain proper knowledge via education. A brilliant education could open doors of opportunities. Being educated is very important aspect of my life. Why people want to have their high education? As for me I have my reasons why I want to get high education.
I’m personally aware that the satisfaction and feeling of accomplishment upon receiving a college degree is one that cannot easily be topped. College education is becoming even more important than it has been in the past. A bachelor's degree is now becoming a minimum requirement for many jobs that previously only required a high school degree. Education is important because without it I feel disconnected form the world, and I can’t really live a successful life. With a decent education I can change the world, or at least make a major difference. One might observe that education get you connected with the world and create a brighter path for life to go through.
I think a good education is imperative because it will influence my life in the future. From my early age, my parents often tells me about how education is very important to find a good job. And this is true because if I want to be a registered nurse, businessman, doctor or a lower, or an engineer I must have an education. It will help me get a well-paying job, or open up a business, which is something I am passionate about. In a business, you are usually dealing with invoices or bills, receipts, make purchases and sales; so a great skill of math is involved as well as organization and management skills. One might observe that a decent education is key to make plans a reality.
I also think an excellent education is crucial because it will affect my family in one way or another. It will benefit the family I have now, and the family I will have in the future. I hope to support my family financially, with the great job education will help me get, and by being a role model and educator to the children I will raise. I want to be able to answer questions my children will have to; to give them knowledge and a decent education for their futures as well. An education would also impact the family I have now because a nice education would give me a chance to go out into the world, get a job, and somewhere to live. Without a job I would not have the money to provide for myself, or get a home, and would be an inconvenience to my family now. One might observe that the education I get or do not get will affect my family, and family is very important to me.
Another reason why I want to get high education is because all members in my family have already received their high education. My father has finished the Science Bachelor, and my mother has finished Account and Finance Bachelor. All my life I was listening from them that it is very important to get high education. When I decided to attend college they were happy and encouraged me to work hard. They bought me a car as a way of motivating me. It also helps me to know that if am educated I can acquire great things for myself. One might observe that family’s support in getting education is very important. At least it was so for me.
College will give me a better knowledge of things. For one I will be able to work better with others because I will have to work with people more often. Via education I will acquire not only factual knowledge but also the way a refined person should behave. Good manners and gentle ways are taught in the process of socializing and cultivating which is inseparable from education. Therefore I will have more experience to communicate with people. Having more knowledge will also give me better problem solving skills because in college you have to work harder and study more. I will be able to take on greater task in life because a good education will grant a better chance at functioning better as a whole. One might observe that through education we learn how to socialize, solve problems and make us unique from uneducated people.
In conclusion, I believe education is essential in every area of my life. I’m not sure many people many people realize it, but education is an extremely critical part of life. By having decent education, my life can enhance the lives of others. A man named Nelson Mandela once said, “Education is the most powerful weapon we can use to change the world.” And I want to change the world. To me, a good education equals greater life. One might observe that education is most important in life like our basic need foods, clothe and shelter.
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