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Topic: Describe a moment which has an important impact on you. Why is it important?
It has been 3 years since the day I got the acceptance from the International University, my recent school. Although there must have been some unwanted trouble during studying there, I will never regret for my decision. The moment I put my first step in this school, my life has been changed.
Admittedly, I used to be like an industrial chicken in my house. My mother always watched over me. I did not allow going so far. I had to tell my mother where I would go and she would take me to that place. My duty, at that time, was nothing but study. I was afraid of thinking about the time I would go to the university because it was 15 km far away from my home.
The day I attended to the university, I knew it was time for my mother to release my hand. I did not want to be a little chicken anymore. I must prove my independence to my parents. Almost every day, I had to catch 2 buses to go to school and tried to come home on time before my mother could get worry. In my free time, I prepared meals for my whole family. That was not bad for the beginning.
Making new friends was also my challenge. My parents were worry that I could meet some bad guys in new school. Fortunately, I met many lovely friends and they helped me a lot in study as well as entertaining. Being in this group, I have become more active when joining some great activities with them. The most memorable time we had spent together was the Singapore trip last summer. My parents started to feel relieved when letting me study far away from them.
Until now, I am still grateful for being a student of International University, the only public college using English as a medium for instruction. It not only creates a good environment for me to study but also brings me wonderful friends. The most important thing is now my parents are ready to let me fly away.
Topic: Describe a moment which has an important impact on you. Why is it important?
It has been 3 years since the day I got the acceptance from the International University, my recent school. Although there must have been some unwanted trouble during studying there, I will never regret for my decision. The moment I put my first step in this school, my life has been changed.
Admittedly, I used to be like an industrial chicken in my house. My mother always watched over me. I did not allow going so far. I had to tell my mother where I would go and she would take me to that place. My duty, at that time, was nothing but study. I was afraid of thinking about the time I would go to the university because it was 15 km far away from my home.
The day I attended to the university, I knew it was time for my mother to release my hand. I did not want to be a little chicken anymore. I must prove my independence to my parents. Almost every day, I had to catch 2 buses to go to school and tried to come home on time before my mother could get worry. In my free time, I prepared meals for my whole family. That was not bad for the beginning.
Making new friends was also my challenge. My parents were worry that I could meet some bad guys in new school. Fortunately, I met many lovely friends and they helped me a lot in study as well as entertaining. Being in this group, I have become more active when joining some great activities with them. The most memorable time we had spent together was the Singapore trip last summer. My parents started to feel relieved when letting me study far away from them.
Until now, I am still grateful for being a student of International University, the only public college using English as a medium for instruction. It not only creates a good environment for me to study but also brings me wonderful friends. The most important thing is now my parents are ready to let me fly away.